Saturday, November 14, 2009

A poem--your thoughts please?

half-vast conspiracy; paranoid Narcissus








Only half as vast as the Kennedy conspiracy


no Bilderbergers or Masons, just me


conspiring to send me down the hole


with me and me and me and


whoever wants


to go for a ride


tight spiral spin into the me of me


where You reside, where I hide from me


and me and me.

A poem--your thoughts please?
Being only half understood (by me) doesn't stand in the way of enjoying the humor of the poem, and the playful use of language. I don't know what Bilderbergers or Masons are, but this poem is certainly not half vast, whichever way you spell that. I like the irony of the narcissist disparaging his self-importance.
Reply:Strangely compelling poem, but it not a ride I would like to take with you. Goodness what we both might find.
Reply:It's interesting.


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