Poem---whadaya think?

half-vast conspiracy:paranoid Narcissus








Only half as vast as the Kennedy conspiracy


no Bilderbergers or Masons, just me


conspiring to send me down the hole


with me


and me and me and whoever wants


to go for a ride


tight spiral spin into the me of me


where You reside, where I hide from me and me and me.

Poem---whadaya think?
It has the word "me" in it too much! Lay down on the me's, and think of another word to replace "me". Just saying...if you want to make it better.
Reply:Well, you asked. I absolutely love it! Sound like Alice in Wonderland.
Reply:I think the "me's" add to the power behind this,


it would make for a grand short "slam"





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Reply:well besides the "Me's" in the thing the poem is pretty evasive

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